This is sneaky. The action runs for 10 steps, then fails on step 11 with a generic error.
One of the most notorious reasons for Photoshop actions not working is the Oil Paint filter. Many artistic sketch actions utilize this filter. However, on certain graphics card configurations or older versions of Photoshop, this filter may be disabled or glitchy. photoshop actions not working
Photoshop actions are not universal. Check your file tab: This is sneaky